Something Concise

I was thinking of writing a story in least possible words. And the one below is a little try! 

“You are madly in love with him” He murmured. 

“Yeah, Him” she moaned the last syllable so eccentrically that it sounded like You.

 

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13 Comments Add yours

  1. Alok Singhal says:

    Good one in a few words!

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  2. Matt On Accident says:

    You’re on to something here. I’m going to try this!

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    1. Gi ahead! You will enjoy. 😀

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  3. izza ifzaal says:

    Amazing

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you very much! 🙂

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  4. aramsey_poet says:

    I love the allusion in “him”.

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    1. That’s what I intended. 😀

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      1. aramsey_poet says:

        I thought that might be so. Really great.

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  5. Melanie (DoesItEvenMatterWhoIReallyAm?) says:

    That’s awesome!

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    1. Thank you very much 😀

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      1. Melanie (DoesItEvenMatterWhoIReallyAm?) says:

        Oui oui!

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